I'm always on the fence about that sort of stories, because if it leans too much into rom-com I tend not to like it, but it was pretty enjoyable so far!
I have stumbled upon something I think is an error though!: If I decide to go with Dan for the fake dating thing, and then invite Tar to MC's room to talk about how they acted when they learned about it, then after saying pink suits them (or any other option in that choice), I get a notice that the spice scene is not written yet. But there wasn't any romantic content with them at this point on my playthrough and I never hinted towards it so there shouldn't be a spicy scene to begin with - at least not by default just by saying pink suits them (in my case). And after the scene, the romance bar goes from 0 to 25% without any true input from me about it. The only way to avoid this is to "sleep it off" instead, but considering my MC, it would make sense to want to clear things out with Tar instead. It's a bit sad not to be able to talk about it with them.
Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yes, this part is unfinished because it's supposed to be a sex scene, but I will make sure to add a platonic part where MC gets to talk it out.
That was one big and juicy update, love the different POVs and OMG, the plot twist at the end! And the cameo!
A logical hiccup I noticed. I understand that Dan definitely has some strong feelings about MC no matter what, so his hurt behavior is understandable (I went with Cass first). But the way Tariq acted on Dan's route was wild. I made sure to never pick anything even remotely flirtatious when interacting with him (limited as our interactions were), and he still acted all betrayed for not being picked as a plus one. Whether he is delusional or entitled, idk, either way, it wasn't a good look for a character.
(Btw, does only Cass have finished nsfw scenes atm?)
I had Tar show up and apologize for that behavior, but I guess you have to choose their route. I'll make sure a text message is sent to MC as an apology if you don't decide to take Tar's route again.
Yes, as of now only Cass has NSFW scenes, next update I will add the others.
It was what happens *after* the apology dialogue that puzzled me: him popping up when Dan leaves your apartment while mentioning your practicing being a fake couple - the kicked puppy look and all. Like the game assigns him as a default Dan counterpart no matter what MC does (whether you do or don't go to clear the air in the previous part, he is still there to make you feel like a dick))).
Do I hate Micah? No not at all. I can respect we have a difference in lifestyle, and they slay. Am I still going to have a blast fcking with their marriage and stealing Taylor like the petty little shit I am? ...Yes. Yes I am.
Can't wait for more! Good job with Micah's sprites - they definitely have a face that just "asks for a shovel", as we say in my social circle. And if the dream sequence is any indication, I'm going to have fun hating them)
I just read this on dashingdon around a week ago, but then i stumbled here-- Can't wait 'till it developed more and get completed! I'm so excited that it turned out as a vn!
that was awesome, I love all three of our (five) love interests :D very lovely and the wonderful music when MC and their friend with benefits are heating each other up at night :3
This is pretty good so far. The sex scene wasn't bad but was a bit short and not as detailed as the rating implies - will future ones be more detailed & explicit? Also, will we be able to choose how dominant or submissive our MC is, and/or if we prefer to top or bottom? I'm playing as a gay male (hopefully dominant top) MC.
I noticed two errors in the game text, too. * Cassidy says: 'Ummm, making peace with him is still a long short[...]' - 'short' should be 'shot'. * Daniel says: 'You could have called take a taxi, Hayden[...]' - Either 'take' could be omitted, or it could be 'you could have taken a taxi' (not sure which you were going for).
Looking forward to see how this one progresses! :)
And to answer your question about how explicit the game will be. Explicit games are my specialty, and giving the player autonomy to choose top or bottom is also my specialty. So the answer is yes to all your questions.
The first episode is not explicit because I wanted to keep things tame, but they will get spicy later. Thanks for playing.
Hey so I have played this game before and love it. But I have an issue with trying play it, I would use the link and wait for everything to load, the main screen will pop up and then a few seconds later it immediately kicks me out of google, I don't know why it does this, but if it helps I have been trying to play on a Amazon fire tablet and have no other way to play other than this excluding my ps4.
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Hey, I like this a lot!
I'm always on the fence about that sort of stories, because if it leans too much into rom-com I tend not to like it, but it was pretty enjoyable so far!
I have stumbled upon something I think is an error though!:
If I decide to go with Dan for the fake dating thing, and then invite Tar to MC's room to talk about how they acted when they learned about it, then after saying pink suits them (or any other option in that choice), I get a notice that the spice scene is not written yet. But there wasn't any romantic content with them at this point on my playthrough and I never hinted towards it so there shouldn't be a spicy scene to begin with - at least not by default just by saying pink suits them (in my case). And after the scene, the romance bar goes from 0 to 25% without any true input from me about it. The only way to avoid this is to "sleep it off" instead, but considering my MC, it would make sense to want to clear things out with Tar instead. It's a bit sad not to be able to talk about it with them.
Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yes, this part is unfinished because it's supposed to be a sex scene, but I will make sure to add a platonic part where MC gets to talk it out.
Thanks, that's great to know!
I.love.it This was super well written, every character and place super well designed. 10/10 I would recommend It. I cant wait for more
Wait a moment....are you also the writer of When Life gives you Lemons?????!!!
Yes.
That was one big and juicy update, love the different POVs and OMG, the plot twist at the end! And the cameo!
A logical hiccup I noticed. I understand that Dan definitely has some strong feelings about MC no matter what, so his hurt behavior is understandable (I went with Cass first). But the way Tariq acted on Dan's route was wild. I made sure to never pick anything even remotely flirtatious when interacting with him (limited as our interactions were), and he still acted all betrayed for not being picked as a plus one. Whether he is delusional or entitled, idk, either way, it wasn't a good look for a character.
(Btw, does only Cass have finished nsfw scenes atm?)
I had Tar show up and apologize for that behavior, but I guess you have to choose their route. I'll make sure a text message is sent to MC as an apology if you don't decide to take Tar's route again.
Yes, as of now only Cass has NSFW scenes, next update I will add the others.
It was what happens *after* the apology dialogue that puzzled me: him popping up when Dan leaves your apartment while mentioning your practicing being a fake couple - the kicked puppy look and all. Like the game assigns him as a default Dan counterpart no matter what MC does (whether you do or don't go to clear the air in the previous part, he is still there to make you feel like a dick))).
This is so freaking good!
Do I hate Micah? No not at all. I can respect we have a difference in lifestyle, and they slay. Am I still going to have a blast fcking with their marriage and stealing Taylor like the petty little shit I am? ...Yes. Yes I am.
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Can't wait for more! Good job with Micah's sprites - they definitely have a face that just "asks for a shovel", as we say in my social circle. And if the dream sequence is any indication, I'm going to have fun hating them)
🤣 Glad you like it.
Can't wait for more 🤩
can't wait new episode....
I just read this on dashingdon around a week ago, but then i stumbled here-- Can't wait 'till it developed more and get completed! I'm so excited that it turned out as a vn!
that was awesome, I love all three of our (five) love interests :D very lovely and the wonderful music when MC and their friend with benefits are heating each other up at night :3
Can't wait for more!
Loved the demo! I find the characters really intriguing! Looking forward to this project <3
excellent, i enjoyed this demo and looking forward to the next update on itch
Ooooh, so excited abt were this is going!!!!
C.C.Hill strikes again with another masterpiece in progress! You keep us wanting more and the final product will be well worth waiting.
This is pretty good so far. The sex scene wasn't bad but was a bit short and not as detailed as the rating implies - will future ones be more detailed & explicit?
Also, will we be able to choose how dominant or submissive our MC is, and/or if we prefer to top or bottom? I'm playing as a gay male (hopefully dominant top) MC.
I noticed two errors in the game text, too.
* Cassidy says: 'Ummm, making peace with him is still a long short[...]'
- 'short' should be 'shot'.
* Daniel says: 'You could have called take a taxi, Hayden[...]'
- Either 'take' could be omitted, or it could be 'you could have taken a taxi' (not sure which you were going for).
Looking forward to see how this one progresses! :)
Thanks for the typos report. Those are helpful.
And to answer your question about how explicit the game will be. Explicit games are my specialty, and giving the player autonomy to choose top or bottom is also my specialty. So the answer is yes to all your questions.
The first episode is not explicit because I wanted to keep things tame, but they will get spicy later. Thanks for playing.
That's really great to hear - thanks for replying! :)
You made Micah Bell a romance option? Arthur Morgan is happy to hear he's no longer the one being called 'pretty boy', at least. LOL. (just joking)
Oh my Goodness!!! I've been waiting for this demo for so long. I've read it on dashingdon, was absolutely interesting ^^.
Big Business
At first i was like "who this?" Then i seen this was moved to itchio and now i'm like "ok qualityyyyy." I'm definitely about to read this tonight.
YES!!! So excited for this demo! You are such a creative powerhouse! <3
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Hey so I have played this game before and love it. But I have an issue with trying play it, I would use the link and wait for everything to load, the main screen will pop up and then a few seconds later it immediately kicks me out of google, I don't know why it does this, but if it helps I have been trying to play on a Amazon fire tablet and have no other way to play other than this excluding my ps4.
Hello, yeah I don't think it's compatible to play on Amazon fire. Sorry.
Dang that sucks😔